I revised my poem (the rhythm was Clunky)
The Glass
Some call the glass half empty.
Some say half full instead.
So I drank all the water
and toddled off to bed.
Poem copyright 2012 by Douglas Florian
22 hours ago
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Now that's a very positive attitude! :)
Thanks Kelly. May all your glasses be full.
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